Question

【题目】教师是否应该没收学生的课外读物呢？为此，你班针对这一问题进行讨论。请你根据表格中的提示，向某英文报社介绍同学们的观点，并表达自己的看法。

赞成没收的理由	反对没收的理由	你的看法
1、浪费时间 2、促进学习 3、关心学生	1、拓展视野 2、放松身心 3、激化师生矛盾	？

注意：1、文章必须包括表中的全部内容；

2、词数100左右 ；

3、参考词汇 没收 confiscate; 课外读物 outside reading

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, we’ve had a discussion on whether teachers should confiscate students’ outside reading or not. Opinions vary from person to person.

Some think it’s necessary to do so. First, doing outside reading is a waste of time, and too much this kind of reading makes things worse. Second, confiscation helps improve students’ study. Third, teachers certainly mean to care about students. However, others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view, outside reading can help them learn more. Besides, they can physically and mentally relax a little in this way. What’s more, teachers and students may get angry with each other because of confiscation.

In my opinion, reading some novels, poems etc. is quite beneficial. But what students read and how much time they spend on it are equally important. So teachers should give students tips on how to read properly. Only in this way can outside reading play a positive role in students’ study and life.

【解析】

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【亮点说明】提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。文章使用了很好的短语和句子：vary变化，a waste of time浪费时间，get angry with生气，beneficial有益的，play a positive role in扮演一个积极的角色，whether teachers should confiscate students’ outside reading or not.宾语从句，what students read and how much time they spend on it主语从句，Only in this way can outside reading play a positive role in students’ study and life.倒装句，同时运用了First，Second，Third，Besides，What’s more等使得文章的条理更清晰。