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5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
改正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last Saturday，I went to the People's Park with my parents．We were hanging out while we saw a naughty boy throwing a banana's skin casual on the ground．Just then，an old man passes by and didn't notice the skin．He slipped on it and fell down．On see that，we hurriedly went up and found that he was injure．So I called 120for help immediately and then an ambulance soon arrived at and took an old man to the nearest hospital．However，the boy had left before we knew it．It was the boy's casual behavior caused this accidents．It's high time that we minded our manners and behaved us．

分析 本文讲述了作者在公园时碰到的一次事故．
我们正在逛公园，就在那时，看到一个孩子随意的吧香蕉皮仍在街上，一位老人踩在香蕉皮上摔倒了，我们叫来了急救车，把老人送到医院，但是那个孩子在这之前已经离开了．我们应该注意自己的行为．

解答 Last Saturday，I went to the People's Park with my parents．We were hanging out while we saw a naughty boy throwing a banana's skin casual on the ground．Just then，an old man passes by and didn't notice the skin．He slipped on it and fell down．On see that，we hurriedly went up and found that he was injure．So I called 120 for help immediately and then an ambulance soon arrived at  and took an old man to the nearest hospital．However，the boy had left before we knew it．It was the boy's casual behavior∧caused this accidents．It's high time that we minded our manners and behaved us．
解析：
1．while--when．考查状语从句的引导词．根据主语We were hanging out 可知用when，表示"我们正在逛街，就在那时，看到一个孩子随意的吧香蕉皮仍在街上"．
2．casual--casually．考查副词的用法．修饰动词短语throwing a banana's skin 用副词casually．
3．passes--passed．考查谓语动词的时态．本文讲述的是过去的事，所以谓语动词用过去式passed．
4．see--seeing．考查非谓语动词．介词on用动名词seeing做宾语．
5．injure--injured．考查派生词．本句表示"他受伤了"，所以用形容词injured做表语，表示"受伤的"．
6．去掉at．考查介词．本句里arrived后面没有宾语，所以去掉 at．
7．an--the．考查冠词．特指上文提到的an old man 用定冠词the．
8．caused前加that．考查强调句式．和It was 一起，强调主语the boy's casual behavior用that．
9．accidents--accident．考查名词．这只是一场事故，所以用单数accident．
10．us--ourselves．考查代词．因为主语是we，所以动词behaved 的宾语不能用us，应该用反身代词ourselves，表示"举止得当"．

点评 考查短文改错．
本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致．各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用．一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多．平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构．修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑．

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