题目内容
【题目】假如你是校汉服(Han costume)俱乐部主席李华。近期俱乐部将举办一场有外国交换生参加的汉服设计大赛.你将代表主办方在开幕式上发言。请根据以下要点写一篇发言稿:
1. 大赛目的;
2. 大赛规则;
3. 对选手的祝福。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua. As the chairman of Han costume club, I sincerely welcome all of you to take part in the Han costume Design competition.
Firstly, allow me to give a brief introduction of this competition. We hold the competition not only because we are interested in Han costume but also to show the beauty of traditional Chinese culture. The competitors have three days to design and prepare their entries according to the given topic. By the deadline they need to submit the entries, which will be graded by our professional judges then. The competitor whose entry gets the highest score will be the final champion.
Thank you for coming here, especially those exchange students. Hope you can get good grades. And most importantly, enjoy the competition!
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇发言稿,代表学校汉服设计大赛的主办方在开幕式上发言。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 欢迎与祝福(welcome and wishes)
2. 大赛相关
1)大赛目的(aim of the competition)
2)大赛规则(rules of the competition)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
welcome;chairman;take part in;design;aim;introduce;judge;grade;score;topic;exchange students
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m Li Hua, chairman of Han costume club in our school.
2. Welcome to the Han costume Design Competition.
3. Let me introduce the aim and rules of the competition.
4. All the entries will be graded by our judges.
5. The one with the highest score will be the final winner.
6. Wish all the competitors enjoy the competition and get good grades.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改