题目内容
16.Doug Nordquist was a high jumper,who trained for years to make the Olympic team.In the 1984Olympics,he jumped his best ever-seven feet,six inches.But he didn't win a gold medal.He came in fifth place."I came away from there feeling like a winner,"says Doug Nordquist.
Doug thinks being a winner doesn't mean coming in first.It means doing your personal best.Sometimes he earned gold and silver medals.Sometimes he got fifth place.As long as he has done his best,Doug feels good about himself.Though he wants to take home a gold,silver,or bronze medal,he knows he's always a winner,no matter what happens.
Doug thinks about his other job-teaching high school band-the same way.He believes that"if you put yourself into your work,you can accomplish whatever you want."One of his students explains,"Mr.Nordquist says,‘think higher and you can reach it.'"
His students have won many awards in Los Angeles and Orange County band competitions.But he reminds them"it's not the awards that are as important as all the things we do to get there."The students are winners because they've learned to play their instruments and work with one another the best that they can.
【写作内容】
1 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容.
2以约120个词谈谈你对参加比赛是不是为了得金牌的想法,内容包括:
(1)分析文中Doug 的人生态度;
(2)你认为参加比赛是为了拿奖牌吗?
(3)我们应如何培养健康的心态?
【写作要求】
1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子.
2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯.
分析 这是一篇材料作文.写作时,要先对文章的主题进行概括,再对内容进行评论,表达自己的看法.文章要表达态度和看法,要用第一人称和现在时态进行写作.要点要写全,评论要紧扣文章主题.
重要短语和句型:
trying one's best 尽最大的努力
a positive attitude 态度积极
as long as 只要
enrich 丰富
aim at 以…为目标
He thinks that as long as we do our best,we are winners.
他认为只要我们尽力了我们就是赢家.
that引导宾语从句;从句中有as long as连接的条件状语从句.
We take part in the competitions not to win medals,but to challenge ourselves to do our best.
我们参加比赛不是为了得奖,而是要挑战自我,让自己做到最好.
not…but…不是…而是…连接对称结构.
Whatever we do,we should try our best and put our talent into good use,which helps us to succeed in life.
无论我们做什么,我们都应该尽力,好好利用自己的聪明才智,这可以帮助我们取得成功.
whatever引导让步状语从句;which引导非限制性定语从句,修饰前面整个句子的内容.
解答 One possible version:
Doug Nordquist,once a high jumper,now a teacher for high school band,thinks that trying one's best means success even though he failed to come in first.(概括文章大意)
Doug Nordquist has a positive attitude towards life.For many people,failing to win a medal means being a failure.But Doug thinks differently.He thinks that as long as we do our best,we are winners.(高分句型一)
I completely agree with Doug.We take part in the competitions not to win medals,but to challenge ourselves to do our best.(高分句型二)The efforts we make during the process are more important than winning medals.Whatever we do,we should try our best and put our talent into good use,which helps us to succeed in life.(高分句型三)(表达看法)
In our daily life it is important to develop a positive attitude towards life.We should enrich our mind by reading books.More importantly,we should not always aim at winning medals.(总结观点)
点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力.写作时要注意:要点的提炼要全;关键短语和句型要写对;过渡词和过渡短语要自然,通顺地道;最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确.
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The report from the Sutton Trust education charity,entitled Baby Bonds,makes the case that it has an important impact on children's future educational chances as well as their emotional well-being.It is based on an analysis of more than 100studies on the issue,including home visits and assessments and observations of children in a range of countries.The trust argues that although psychologists have been aware of attachment theory,it has not been seen by policy makers as a key influence on educational attainment.And it asks them to take this into account.The report says when babies and toddlers do not form these strong parental bonds-known as secure attachment-they are more likely to exhibit poor language and poor behavior before they reach school.
And it cites international studies which suggest this continues late into life,with insecure children more likely to leave school early or duck out of employment or training.They are also more likely to suffer from aggression,defiance and hyperactivity later in life.
The Sutton Trust says its analysis of the research suggests that about 40% of children in the UK lack a secure attachment with their parents.Lead author Sophie Moullin said that when her team looked at large scale representative studies in a number of countries they all found,from their observations,that between 38% and 42% of children suffered from poor attachment in all the different study locations.She added:"Secure attachment really helps children with emotional and social development and at school it really helps them to manage their behavior.Shouting,looking out of the window,hitting each other…These are the things that teachers will tell you that are stopping children from learning.It's really only as we understand more about these behavior problems that we have decided that a lot of it goes back to this early bonding with parents."
Research director at the trust Conor Ryan said:"Better bonding between parents and babies could lead to more social mobility,as there is such a clear link to education,behavior and future employment.The educational divide emerges early in life,with a 19-month school readiness gap between the most and least advantaged children by the age of five.
This report clearly identifies the fundamental role secure attachment could have in narrowing that school readiness gap and improving children's life chances."More support from health visitors,children's centers together with local authorities in helping parents improve how they bond with young children could play a role in narrowing the education gap."
The Sutton Trust study | |
Introduction | The study reveals children's early attachment to parents (71)largely/greatly affects their ability to speak,learn and think. |
Method of the study | Researchers (72)analyzed/analysed more than 100case studies on the issue through visiting homes,assessing children and (73)observingchildren. |
Statistics of the study | •In the UK,only about 60% of children have a secure attachment with their parents. •In other countries where the studies were carried out,the numbers are quite (74)close. |
Negative effects of insecure (75)attachment | •A (76)lack of secure parental bonding may lead to poor language and behavior for preschool children. At the age of five,the (77)biggest school readiness gap between children can be 19months. •Without secure attachment,future life difficulties such as quitting school,(78)hiding/escaping from work and other emotional issues would emerge. |
The significance of parental attachment | Better bonding between parents and babies could lead to a change in people's social (79)status because it narrows children's school readiness gap and it improves children's life chances. |
Suggestion | A (80)combined/joint effort is needed for strong parent-child bonding. |
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