Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I still remembered my first English class at senior high school. My teacher talked in English all through the class, that made it very difficult for me to follow him. It was such different from the lessons I had been taken in junior high school.

In my next English class, he walked up to me if I was reading the text aloud like the other student. After listen for a while, he gave me a big smile and said few encouraging words. His smile lit me up suddenly. Later, I became very actively and volunteered to answer his questions. Thanks to her smile, I became confident in my English classes.

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