题目内容
19.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything.Without any hesitation,I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,but jumped into the water quickly.I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety.To his great relief,the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done.I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
分析 本文讲述了作者见义勇为的事情.上个周末作者在颐和园的一个湖边读书的时候,忽然听到呼救的声音,他发现远处一个小孩落水了,作者毫不犹豫地脱掉上衣,跳进水里救出了小孩.作者为自己的表现感到骄傲.
解答 Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake
usual
while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking to find
when heard shocked
a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything.
people
Without any hesitation,I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,but jumped into the water quickly
去掉had and
.I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety.To his great relief,the kid was saved.
my
I was proud∧what I had done.I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
of hope
1.usually改为usual;考查固定搭配,as usual是固定短语,意为"照例,像往常一样".
2.while改为when;考查固定用法,when suddenly表示一件事正在进行中突然发生了另外一件事,这里的when相当于at that time.
3.hear改为heard;考查动词的时态,本文讲的是上周末的事情,所以用过去时态.
4.shocking改为shocked;考查分词形式作形容词,现在分词作形容词时修饰物,过去分词作形容词时修饰人,这里句子的主语是I,指人,所以用过去分词作形容词.
5.peoples改为people;考查名词,people作"人,人们"讲时是不可数名词,没有复数形式,所以用people.
6.去掉had;考查动词的时态,这里陈述过去的一个事实,所以用一般过去时.
7.but改为and;考查连词,分析句子结构,作者"脱掉上衣,跳进水里",这应该是并列关系,故用and.
8.his改为my;考查形容词性物主代词,结合语境分析,这里应是"使我欣慰的是…",所以把his改为my.
9.proud后面加of;考查介词,be proud of是固定短语,意为"以…为骄傲".
10.wish改为hope;考查近义词辨析,wish和hope都可以表示"希望",但后面接从句时,wish一般表示强烈而又难以实现的愿望,hope则表示可以实现或能达到的希望,根据句意,此处应该用hope.
点评 整体理解短文,充分运用所学的基础知识,包括一些实词和虚词的用法,固定短语搭配,习惯性用法,结合上下文整体关系,找出错误并加以修正.
A. | condition | B. | honest | C. | doctor | D. | lose |
A. | through | B. | smoothly | C. | breathe | D. | worthy |
As I told my flatmates about the experience,they didn't hesitate to express their (47)D.From the western point of view,experiences like these are dangerous.(48)A,to be"more Chinese",I stayed in touch with my lift friend.
The following week she (49)Ame to go for milk tea with her and her (50)B.I though that the girl would(51)Athe opportunity to practice English.However,most of our(52)Cwas in Chinese!They even went to great length to help me practice(53)Dmy Chinese is only middle level.Our next(54)Cwas when we gathered together to make dumplings.They made me (55)Acompletely at ease in their home.
After these(56)Bmeet-ups I have spent lots of time with the family,and I feel that they have become my own (57)Dabroad.Fortunately,I didn't let our western point of view act as a(58)C.This experience has made my stay in China (59)B.I feel like this simple difference in(60)Dis something we in the west can learn from Chinese culture.
41.A.lucky | B.satisfied | C.eager | D.brave |
42.A.dormitory | B.lift | C.apartment | D.office |
43.A.madly | B.swiftly | C.blindly | D.elegantly |
44.A.apologized | B.clarified | C.opposed | D.replied |
45.A.refused | B.compromised | C.offered | D.struggled |
46.A.gave | B.mentioned | C.exchanged | D.remembered |
47.A.admiration | B.desire | C.interest | D.concern |
48.A.Yet | B.Therefore | C.Also | D.Thus |
49.A.invited | B.forced | C.expected | D.allowed |
50.A.flatmate | B.daughter | C.colleague | D.relative |
51.A.seize | B.abandon | C.conversation | D.argument |
52.A.speech | B.description | C.conversation | D.argument |
53.A.so | B.unless | C.if | D.as |
54.A.performance | B.vacation | C.meeting | D.trip |
55.A.feel | B.behave | C.pretend | D.look |
56.A.recent | B.initial | C.familiar | D.difficult |
57.A.parent | B.community | C.group | D.family |
58.A.message | B.barrier | C.challenge | D.signal |
59.A.embarrassing | B.changeable | C.disturbing | D.unforgettable |
60.A.restriction | B.competence | C.attitude | D.privilege |