Question

【题目】随着网络的普及，越来越多的学生依赖网络做作业。请你依据以下内容写一篇英语短文。

1. 借助网络做作业的优点：省时；查询答案方便等；

2. 依赖网络做作业的缺点：导致懒惰；养成不良学习习惯等；

3. 你的建议。

注意：1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数100 左右；

3. 开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。

Nowadays, more and more students do their schoolwork with the help of the Internet.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, more and more students do their schoolwork with the help of the Internet. Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows. Firstly, with the click of a mouse, the students can get what they want from the Internet quickly, which saves them time on schoolwork. Secondly, if they find something difficult, it’s convenient to search the Internet for answers.

However, depending too much on the Internet may bring some disadvantages. With no effort, some students copy online answers, resulting in laziness and bad studying habits. Worse still, it may kill their creative thinking.

In my opinion, we may enjoy the convenience of the Internet, but turn to it for help when really necessary. In brief, we should use it in a reasonable way.

【解析】

试题分析：随着网络的普及，越来越多的学生依赖网络做作业。请你依据以下内容写一篇英语短文。主要内容包括：1.借助网络做作业的优点：省时；查询答案方便等；2.依赖网络做作业的缺点：导致懒惰；养成不良学习习惯等；3.你的建议。这是一篇明显的提纲作文，就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出以进行写作。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。题文已经告知要求，那么文体应为书信文体，即介绍主要行程；又根据学生根据网络写作业应用第三人称；时态主要用一般现在时即可或一般将来时。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。然后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。

【亮点说明】本文语言凝练，论点鲜明，条理层次清晰。文章第一段借助网络做作业的优点：省时；查询答案方便等现象；文章第二段就依赖网络做作业的缺点：导致懒惰；养成不良学习习惯等；第三段具体阐释了自己的体会。文章使用了which引导的定语从句which saves them time on schoolwork.（这节省了他们在作业上的时间）；动词ing形式做主语depending too much on the Internet（太多依赖网络）。高级短语和结构：Generally speaking一般来讲，With no effort毫不费力。最后一句使用In brief, we should use it in a reasonable way简言之，我们应该以一种合理的方式使用网络，给文章一个完美的结束。