Question

假设你班将举行一次英语班会，主题为“如何做一个好学生”。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文。短文中须包括以下要点：

1、严格自律,刻苦学习 2、尊敬师长,乐于助人

3、遵守校规,不染恶习 4、不无故旷课, 不以强凌弱.

5、不断进步,实现目标

注意：1 词数：100左右。 2 内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

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It’s important and necessary for us to be good students. But how can we became good student？

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Suggested answer:

How to be a good student

It is important and necessary for us to be good students. But how can we become good students? In my opinion, those who are strict with themselves and in their studies can be considered as good students while those with bad behaviors of smoking, drinking or being absent from classes without any reason are admitted to be bad ones. Being good students, we should show respect to our teachers and the elderly and be always ready to help others. Besides we must obey the school regulations, and try not to form the bad habits, such as being addicted to playing computer games, telling lies and teasing and bulling the weak.

In a word, good students are always trying their best to make constant progress so that they can achieve their goals.

 

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，你班将举行一次英语班会，主题为“如何做一个好学生”，客观地介绍讨论的情况。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称。词数100左右，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：be addicted to doing、bulling the weak 、While表示对比 、have more time to spare ，who引导的定语从句，形式主语it结构等都很不错。

考点：观点类作文。