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【题目】假如你是李华,你的美国好友Alice将近期来你所在的城市旅游。请给她写信,告诉她你愿意为她安排住宿及旅游行程。同时,委托她帮你买一个Coach牌子的小钱包,你打算将其作为生日礼物送给妈妈。
注意:1.词数120左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alice,
How is everything getting along with you? I am delighted to hear that you will come to my city for sightseeing. I am writing to tell you my willingness to make arrangements for your tour.
As for accommodation, you have the option of either staying in my home or in a hotel, which I can reserve for you in advance if you like. Besides, I'd like to help you work out a travel schedule. By the way, could you do me a favor and purchase a Coach purse if it doesn't bother you? With my mother's birthday approaching, I wish to present it to her as a birthday gift.
Looking forward to meeting you soon. I hope you will have fun here.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求假如你是李华,你的美国好友Alice将近期来你所在的城市旅游。请给她写信,告诉她你愿意为她安排住宿及旅游行程。同时,委托她帮你买一个Coach牌子的小钱包,你打算将其作为生日礼物送给妈妈。要注意信件的格式和特殊用词。要点:告诉她你愿意为她安排住宿及旅游行程。同时,委托她帮你买一个Coach牌子的小钱包。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: get along with取得进展,write to写信给。还使用了宾语从句I am delighted to hear that you will come to my city for sightseeing.和定语从句As for accommodation, you have the option of either staying in my home or in a hotel, which I can reserve for you in advance if you like.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。