Question

【题目】最近，你校英语园地开辟了一个专栏，请同学们围绕 “Shall we give a helping hand to the old who fall on the ground?”这一话题展开讨论。请根据下图的提示写一篇英语短文。

注意：1.词数在100左右。

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】From the picture we can see that an old man fell on the ground and many people were standing around watching with sympathy,but no one dared to help him up. This is what happens in our society nowadays.

The reason for this is very simple.A few people are dishonest and they will frame those who help them.Some even pretend to be knocked down.Though mangy people around are willing to help them,they don’t trust them and they are afraid of getting themselves int trouble.

In my opinion, on the one hand ,we should all help each other Respecting and taking care of the old is a traditional Chinese virtue.I meet with such a case, I will call 120 first and then do what I can help him.On the other hand, people should be honest so that we coutrust each other.

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇看图作文，围绕 “Shall we give a helping hand to the old who fall on the ground?”这一话题展开讨论，写一篇英语短文。根据所给图片，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇看图作文，文章内容符合图片要求，观点明确，语言精练，结构布局合理，文中使用高级词汇和句子。we can see that an old man fell on the ground and many people were standing around watching with sympathy,but no one dared to help him up.句中使用宾语从句；This is what happens in our society nowadays.句中what引导表语从句，起双重作用；A few people are dishonest and they will frame those who help them.who引导定语从句；Though mangy people around are willing to help them,they don’t trust them and they are afraid of getting themselves int trouble.句中运用Though引导的让步状语从句；people should be honest so that we coutrust each other.结果状语从句巧妙至极；另外，The reason for---，pretend to be knocked down，In my opinion, on the one hand ,等的运用为文章增色添彩。