题目内容
【题目】请阅读下面短文及图画,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
On a sunny day a shepherd (牧羊人) walked with his two hungry sheep along a winding country path. He managed to have them two tied to each other just in case they should go separated. It was quite a long time before they arrived at a place where there was merely a small amount of fresh grass on each side of the path. Both of the sheep were so hungry that they hurried to the grass but in the separate direction as the picture showed. Unfortunately the rope fastening them was not long enough. No matter how hard they struggled, neither was able to reach the grass in front of them.
The shepherd was about to help them when he was surprised to find that one of them should voluntarily abandon the struggle, and went along with the other. Consequently, together the two sheep enjoyed the fresh grass on one side happily, and then the grass on the other.
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词概述上面这则寓言的主要内容。
2.用约120个单词就此则寓言谈谈你的想法,内容包括:
(1)从这则寓言中,你获得了哪些启示?
(2)结合该寓言给你的启示,谈谈你在生活中是如何做的。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
【答案】Possible version:
The fable shares with readers a story about two sheep, both of whom choose cooperation rather than competition in order to have access to the fresh grass of different sides.
As a matter of fact, the fable mirrors that different attitudes may bring about different results. As an old saying goes, union means power. A chopstick breaks easily, while a bunch of them does not. Cooperation is therefore the best policy in any case because it can lead to a win-win situation, where both sides can gain benefit by virtue of joint efforts.
In my daily life, I often cooperate with my classmates when playing basketball, taking part in running races or going in for community-service activities. I learn a lot from my classmates and friends by following their advice. Meanwhile, I also do my part to help them in return. It is teamwork that helps us secure numerous victories.
【解析】本文是一篇图画类作文。1. 用约30个单词概括漫画中的主要内容;要囊括人物、事件,范文中使用了许多高级词汇shares with ,rather than,have access to和both of whom choose cooperation rather than competition in order to……定语从句,以提高文章的档次。
2. 用约120个单词,就此则寓言谈谈你的想法,
考生在成文时应注意:合理发挥想象力,使文章的表达自然,丰满。文章的写作要点要齐全: (1) 从这则寓言中,你获得了哪些启示? the fable mirrors that…(2)结合该寓言给你的启示,谈谈你在生活中是如何做的。In my daily life, I often cooperate with,…注意文章的人称:以第一人称为主。时态:一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇mirror,bring about,lead to,cooperate with,Meanwhile, in return和句型,以提高文章的档次;恰当使用一些连词、插入语,使文章表达自然,流畅。注意次数:80—120之间。
【范文亮点】①Cooperation is therefore the best policy in any case because it can lead to a win-win situation, where both sides can gain benefit by virtue of joint efforts. 定语从句;②I often cooperate with my classmates when playing basketball, taking part in running races or going in for community-service activities.非谓语动词结构;③It is teamwork that helps us secure numerous victories.强调句。