Question

8．假设你是Peter Smith，请给学生会写封建议书，并说出你建议的理由．
（附学生会的倡议书）
Dear Friends，
Spring is in the air on campus．Everything has come back to life．What should we do to add color to the surroundings？What is in your mind to change our dull school life？We are waiting for your suggestions．
                                           The Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于读写任务类作文，根据提示信息给学生会写封建议书，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从不同观点和理由两个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：As is well-known to us all 众所周知； is full of充满了；make the most use of充分利用；make every effort  to 不遗余力；In a word，总之
   As is well-known to us all，the spring is coming．（高分句型一）
  As students，we should make every effort  to study hard and make our life colourful．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear the Students'Union，
      As is well-known to us all，the spring is coming．（高分句型一）The breeze is gently brushing our face．The blue sky is above us．After raining，the flowers are blooming in the garden．The living beings start to grow．Everything is full of  vigor and fragrance．The best season of this year，we can't miss it and we will love it．
　　The spring is coming，and it brings green to the trees and grass，pink and yellow to the flowers．The birds start to sing，the farmers begin to plant crops in the fields．In spring，everywhere is full of hope．People usually say that a good beginning is half done，while spring is the beginning of a year．So we should appreciate it and make the most use of it．As students，we should make every effort  to study hard and make our life colourful．（高分句型二）In a word，I hope that our life will be better and better in the future．
                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours 
                                                                                                                                                                                 Peter Smith

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．