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13．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
 Last Sunday，it was my father's funny day．After supper，my father went to see the film．But in our surprise，he came back just about half an hour later．I asked him what was the matter．He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema．He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers．Surprising，they looked at their ticket carefully，only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different．So they looked at the tickets more carefully．After a while，my father apologized the woman，saying，"Sorry，I make a mistake．Take this seat，please．"The fact was that his ticket found out in his desk drawer was for the film a month ago．

分析 本文主要讲述了作者的父亲上周日去看电影时在电影院发生的一件小趣事．

解答 Last Sunday，it was my father's funny day．After supper，my father went to see the film．But in our surprise，he came back just about half an hour later．I asked him what was the matter．He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema．He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers．Surprising，they looked at their ticket carefully，only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different．So they looked at the tickets more carefully．After a while，my father apologized∧the woman，saying，"Sorry，I make a mistake．Take this seat，please．"The fact was that his ticket found out in his desk drawer was for the film a month ago
1．the改为a 考查冠词．"看电影"用英语表示是：see a film或go to the cinema．
2．in改为to 考查介词．to one's surprise意为"使某人惊奇的是"，是固定搭配．
3．what改为that 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词 thing指物，在从句中作主语，用关系代词that．
4．while改为when 考查连词．此处是：be doing…when…句型，意为"正在做…这时…"，when是并列连词，意为"这时…"．
5．her改为him 考查代词．根据句意：一位妇女向"他"（我父亲）走来．
6．Surprising改为Surprised 考查过去分词．surprised是形容词化的过去分词作状语表示原因．
7．ticket改为tickets 考查名词复数．此处tickets指二人合起来的电影票，要用复数形式．
8．加to 考查动词用法．apologize意为"道歉"，是不及物动词，表示"向…道歉"时，其后加介词to．
9．make改为made 考查动词时态．make a mistake意为"犯错误"，事情已经发生，要用一般过去时态．
10．去掉 out 考查动词用法．find out意为"查清楚，弄明白"，此处要表达的是"发现，看到"，用过去分词短语found in his desk drawer作定语修饰ticket．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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E．Maybe you are a common student．
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