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4.假定你是李华,近日你校将举办英语演讲活动,题目"The person I admire the most",请你用英语写一篇演讲稿.
注意:1.人物林巧稚,袁隆平,Jane Goodle 选其中一位
2.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
I am very glad to share my topic with you.The person I admire the most is…
Yuan Longping,an agricultural pioneer of China.It is known that there exists hunger in many countries.To help more people to get enough food,Yuan Longping has devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice.(高分句型一) Thanks to his research,the output has been doubled.More importantly,Yuan Longping is willing to share his achievement with others,which contributes to ridding the world of hunger.(高分句型二)
As for me,Yuan Longping is the greatest person in the world.It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot.(高分句型三)Actually,I have some difficulty in learning English.However,where there is devotion,there is a way.I really believe that my devotion can make me expert in English.
Thank you for your listening.that's all.

分析 考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示.给考生自由发挥的余地较大.对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力.在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭.同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:It is known that…众所周知;devote…to致力于,献身于;Thanks to幸亏,由于; More importantly,更重要的是;As for 至于,关于;Actually事实上;However然而;
To help more people to get enough food,Yuan Longping has devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice.(高分句型一)
 More importantly,Yuan Longping is willing to share his achievement with others,which contributes to ridding the world of hunger.(高分句型二)
It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot.(高分句型三)

解答 I am very glad to share my topic with you.The person I admire the most is Yuan Longping,an agricultural pioneer of China.It is known that there exists hunger in many countries.To help more people to get enough food,Yuan Longping has devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice.(高分句型一) Thanks to his research,the output has been doubled.More importantly,Yuan Longping is willing to share his achievement with others,which contributes to ridding the world of hunger.(高分句型二)
      As for me,Yuan Longping is the greatest person in the world.It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot.(高分句型三)Actually,I have some difficulty in learning English.However,where there is devotion,there is a way.I really believe that my devotion can make me expert in English.
      Thank you for your listening.That's all.

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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注意:
1.内容可适当增加,字数不少于100词.
2.开头已经写好,不计入总词数.
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