Question

9．假设你是李华，你和你班的交流生Tom约好晚上一起去看电影．但你的叔叔突然打电话说他出差路过你们城市，让你去车站接他．请你给Tom发一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1．表示歉意；
2．重新约定．
注意：词数100左右．
Dear Tom，
I am very sorry to tell you that I can't go to the cinema with you tonight．（高分句型一）My uncle telephoned me just now．He told me he was passing our city on a business trip and wanted to pay a visit to us，so I have to meet him at the railway station．（高分句型二）I wonder if we can see the film tomorrow．If you are free then we will meet together at 7：00 p．m．at the gate of the cinema．If this change is not convenient to you，it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie．（高分句型三）
Best wishes
Yours
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封电子邮件，写作时，首先要写清要点，包括：表达歉意，解释原因，重新约定时间，在解释原因的时候，要有一定的逻辑，并且再次表示歉意．其次，要注意使用第一人称，最后还要注意时态，以一般过去时态和一般现在时态为主．
【范文亮点】：
本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，语言风格符合书信的文体要求，是一篇较好的范文．"I am very sorry to tell you that I can't go to the cinema with you tonight．"本句使用了that引导的宾语从句．"If you are free then we will meet together at 7：00 p．m．at the gate of the cinema．"本句使用了if引导的条件句．"it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie．"本句中开头的it做形式主语，真正的主语是to inform me of it，还使用了短语so that，使文章语言自然流畅，内容过渡自然，增加了文章的可读性，使文章的表达更具有逻辑性，更富有条理．
 I am very sorry to tell you that I can't go to the cinema with you tonight．（高分句型一）
He told me he was passing our city on a business trip and wanted to pay a visit to us，so I have to meet him at the railway station．（高分句型二）
If this change is not convenient to you，it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I am very sorry to tell you that I can't go to the cinema with you tonight．（高分句型一）My uncle telephoned me just now．He told me he was passing our city on a business trip and wanted to pay a visit to us，so I have to meet him at the railway station．（高分句型二）I wonder if we can see the film tomorrow．If you are free then we will meet together at 7：00 p．m．at the gate of the cinema．If this change is not convenient to you，it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie．（高分句型三）
       Best wishes
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．