Question

11．It is known to all that it is diligence that makes up for the deficiency．（ 勤能补拙 ）
注意：
1、无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
2、除诗歌之外，文体不限；
3、内容必须结合生活学习中的一个事例；
4、文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
5、词数为120左右．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇话题类作文，谈谈你对 It is known to all that it is diligence that makes up for the deficiency．（ 勤能补拙 ）这句话的看法．所以首先必须读懂这句话，并且要用第一人称来写．写作时不能只是生硬的写出这句话的意思，一定要结合实际，举例说明自己的理解．需要注意不要偏离文章中心，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合作文的主题，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意题目要求100词左右，不能写太多，也不能写太少，适中即可．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
Diligence makes up for the deficiency，which means that hard work can compensate for weaknesses．（高分句型一）make up for 弥补；句中有which引导的定语从句
 It was when he was 17 that he attended the middle school．（高分句型二）It is/was…that/who…属于强调句型
Poor as he was in Math，he didn't give up，because he held the belief that diligence makes up for the deficiency．（高分句型三）句中使用了as引导的让步状语从句．使用了倒装，句中还有that 引导的同位语从句
In a nutshell，diligence，which can make up for the deficiency，is not only a positive attitude towards life but also a reliable way to guide us toward success．（高分句型四）句中有which引导的非限制性定语从句；not only…but also…不仅…而且…属于固定表达

解答 Diligence makes up for the deficiency，which means that hard work can compensate for weaknesses．（高分句型一）To my way of thinking，diligence is of great importance to our study and work．（点明主题）
      Take Tong Dizhou，the famous Chinese biologist，for example．It was when he was 17 that he attended the middle school．（高分句型二）Poor as he was in Math，he didn't give up，because he held the belief that diligence makes up for the deficiency．（高分句型三）Determined to catch up with his classmates，he got up early to read．Only after he reviewed what he learned in the daytime did he go to bed．At length，he became a world famous biologist．From his experience，it is safe to say it's diligence that really makes a difference．（举例论证）
      In a nutshell，diligence，which can make up for the deficiency，is not only a positive attitude towards life but also a reliable way to guide us toward success．（高分句型四）So，everybody，be diligent and your efforts will pay off．（个人感想）

点评 本文属于话题类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．．