Question

14．健康一直是人们关注的问题，请根据以下提示，以Health为题，谈谈你对健康的看法：
保持健康的重要性．
保持健康的方法．
多吃水果蔬菜，保持饮食平衡，避免高糖、高脂肪的食物；
多锻炼，健身强体；
摒弃不良习惯．
你自己的看法．
要求：
可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯，但不可逐条翻译；
词数：120左右．

Answer 1

分析 对于谈看法的文章，注意条理要清晰，可以用表顺序的关联词，如first/firstly．second/secondly…then，last but not the least one等等．注意文中所给的信息，不可遗漏，可以多进行一些补充，尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性．时态：用一般现在时．结构上：可采取总分模式．使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次．
【亮点说明】far more important than，On the contrary，get rid of，In conclusion等词组使文章更生动；序数词的使用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly，Besides，Finally使文章条理清晰；we should have enough and reasonable sleep，which can refresh our bodies and protect us from disease使用非限定性定语从句；if we stick to the advice given above过去分词作状语修饰名词，使文章更有水平．表达对某事的看法时，开头使用：we have to，we'd better，we should…it is very important for us to等．文章的安排分为三部分，开头部分：开门见山地引出提建议的内容．正文部分：给出建议，指出其可取之处，．结尾部分：一句话总结，清晰明了．（表示概括归纳的词语：in a word，in short，in brief，on the whole，generally speaking，as I have shown，finally，at last，in summary，in conclusion）

解答 Health
Health is far more important than wealth．Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career．（高分句型）On the contrary，poor health leads to nothing．
How to keep healthy？Firstly，it is very important for us to eat more fruit and vegetables because they provide vitamins．We should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat so that we can keep a balanced diet．（高分句型）Secondly，we should have enough and reasonable sleep，which can refresh our bodies and protect us from disease．（高分句型）Thirdly，we'd better take physical exercise every day to make our bodies strong．Besides，we have to avoid too much work pressure．Finally，we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health，such as drinking and smoking．（高分句型）
In conclusion，if we stick to the advice given above，we'll lead a healthy life．（高分句型）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．