题目内容
【题目】学校运动会将举行,学生会现在面向全校招募志愿者。假设你是李华,一名高中学生,你有意参加此项活动。请你给学校写一封申请信,根据以下要点简要陈述你应聘的理由。
1 .你的爱好:喜欢体育活动;……
2.你的特长:擅长英语;……
3.你的有利条件
4.其他理由:……
注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear sir,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly
【答案】
Dear sir,
I am glad to learn that the sports-meeting is approaching, I really expect to be one of them. I’m Li Hua, a senior three student from No.1 Middle School of Chong Qing. I believe I am fit for the volunteering work. Firstly, I am fond of sports, such as playing basketball, table tennis and so on. In addition, I am good at spoken English, which makes it possible for me to communicate well with others. What’s more, I have enough time to serve as a volunteer. Above all, it will be a good chance for me to make new friends. So I do hope you can take me into account.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类写作,要点已给出,写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇申请信,语言简练,要点明确,结构合理,文中使用高级句子。I am glad to learn that the sports-meeting is approaching,宾语从句用在句中;Firstly, I am fond of sports, such as playing basketball, table tennis and so on动名词运用巧妙; I am good at spoken English, which makes it possible for me to communicate well with others. 非限制性定语从句恰到好处,同时句中还使用了形式宾语;So I do hope you can take me into account.句中的强调谓语堪称经典;另外,Firstly, In addition, What’s more, Above all, So 为文章增色添彩。
