题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年,即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail,邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会,要点如下:
(1)祝贺她顺利通过考试,为她骄傲;(2)感谢她帮助你们学习英语;
(3)时间:星期六晚六点;(4)地点:阳光俱乐部(The Sun Club)302房间;
(5)路线:从她所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公车可直达。
注意:可适当添加细节以使行文连贯;词数100左右,开头和结尾已给,不计入总字数。参考词汇:欢送会 farewell party。
Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams. ________________________________________________
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Yours, faithfully Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. We’ll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.
It’s a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 p.m.? We’ll have dinner together. By the way, you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel, and it will take you directly to the club.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本次作文要求李华的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年,即将回国。现在由李华给她发E-mail,邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会。要点包括:(1)祝贺她顺利通过考试,为她骄傲;(2)感谢她帮助你们学习英语;(3)时间:星期六晚六点;(4)地点:阳光俱乐部(The Sun Club)302房间;(5)路线:从她所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公车可直达。故既要完成任务,又要兼顾形式的要求。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了主语从句All you have gained,定语从句we spent together. delight, make great progress, appreciate, fulfillment等词汇,by the way 等连接词和It’s a pity that…, I wish…等句型。