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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

Nowadays it’s common high school students to skip breakfast, leading to both poor school performance and damage to their health. When asking why they skip breakfast, some students say they think of breakfast as a least important meal of the day, and think it unnecessary. Therefore, some say they have too little time in the morning to have breakfast. And others, mostly girl, say they wanted to lose weight so they skip breakfast.

We suggest that every student has breakfast properly every day, since breakfast can provide the necessary energy that one needs it every day. In addition, have breakfast can help you to concentrate in class and study more efficient.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】在high前加for

【2】asking—asked

【3】a—the

【4】Therefore—Besides

【5】girl—girls

【6】wanted—want

【7】has—have

【8】去掉it

【9】have—having

【10】efficient—efficiently

【解析】

【1】在high前加for 句意：高中学生不吃早饭这是很常见的。It是形式主语，后面的动词不定式复合结构作真正的宾语，故在high前加for。

【2】asking—asked 句意：当他们被问的时候，是被动关系，所以用过去分词，故把asking—asked 。

【3】a—the 句意：最不重要的一顿饭，此处是降级最高级，故把a—the。

【4】Therefore—Besides 句意：除此之外，一些人说早饭的时间太少。故把Therefore—Besides。

【5】girl—girls 句意：另一些人，主要是女孩们，用复数形式，故把girl—girls。

【6】wanted—want 根据句意可知是一般现在时态，故把wanted—want。

【7】has—have “suggest”建议，后面的宾语从句用虚拟语气，should+动词原形，should可以省略，故把has—have。

【8】去掉it 考查定语从句。energy做先行词，后面是定语从句，从句中的it是多余的，故去掉it。

【9】have—having 动名词作主语，故把have—having。

【10】efficient—efficiently 句意：更有效地学习，副词修饰动词，故把efficient—efficiently。