Question

【题目】假设你是某英语报纸的栏目主编Mary，前几天收到一个叫Rose的女孩的来信，信的内容大致如下： Rose的父母在去年被一场车祸夺去了生命，所以她现在搬去跟叔叔一家生活。Rose觉得很难开始新生活，在学校跟同学也相处得不好。她渴望听取你的建议,所以请你写一封回信给她，大致内容如下：

1、安慰她;

2、针对她的现状提一些建议；

3、希望她能好起来。

要求：1、字数120左右；

2、可适当增加内容以使行文连贯；

3、信的开头和结尾已经给出。

Dear Rose,

I’m Mary, chief editor of My Family.________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours Sincerely,

Mary

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Rose,

I’m Mary, chief editor of My Family. Having known about your trouble, I am writing to offer you some suggestions.

First of all, your parents must be blessing you in the heaven though they cannot keep you company now. If you feel sad on festivals, why not talk with your uncle and aunt? It’s unnecessary for you to pretend to be strong.

As for your trouble in school, I’d like to suggest that you should be confident. On one hand, you should open your heart to your classmates. I don’t think they are laughing at you. Perhaps, it is you yourself that think too much. On the other hand, make more friends. If you communicate more with your classmates, you may find that they are easy-going and understanding.

Nothing can defeat a brave heart. I firmly believe that you’ll become truly strong and happy soon.

Yours sincerely,

Mary

【解析】试题分析：假设你是某英语报纸的栏目主编Mary，前几天收到一个叫Rose的女孩的来信，信的内容大致如下： Rose的父母在去年被一场车祸夺去了生命，所以她现在搬去跟叔叔一家生活。Rose觉得很难开始新生活，在学校跟同学也相处得不好。她渴望听取你的建议,所以请你写一封回信给她，大致内容如下：1、安慰她;2、针对她的现状提一些建议；3、希望她能好起来。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。要求：1、字数120左右； 2、可适当增加内容以使行文连贯；3、信的开头和结尾已经给出。

【亮点说明】Having known about your trouble, I am writing to offer you some suggestions.现在分词完成式在句中作时间状语；First of all, your parents must be blessing you in the heaven though they cannot keep you company now.运用让步状语从句，并且主句用含情态动词的进行时态；If you feel sad on festivals, why not talk with your uncle and aunt?条件句和我问句完美结合；I’d like to suggest that you should be confident.宾语从句里含虚拟语气；it is you yourself that think too much.巧妙使用强调句型；I firmly believe that you’ll become truly strong and happy soon.

宾语从句在句中体现；另外，First of all, why not talk，As for，On one hand, On the other hand,使文章显得结构严谨，层次分明，亮点多多。