假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
After the Spring Festival，there arises some hot topics，and lucky money is including as well．To collect opinions from the public，an online survey has made these days．
82% of the participants regard lucky money as one of the most important traditional custom，representing good wishes from the elderly to the new generation．Besides，lucky money is the more attractive part for children，it forms the good memory of our childhood．
The rest，however，think bad of it．For one thing，the amount is grown bigger and bigger，making it a heavy load．For another，it has been a good excuse to bribe （贿赂） people in the power，which is bad for building a healthy and harmonious society．
Personally speaking，lucky money is nothing wrong．Only when we know its meaning can you send our hearty wishes to the young．

分析本文主要介绍人们对红包的不同看法．赞成的人认为，它是中国最重要的传统之一，代表着老人给下一代的祝愿，而且，这也形成了儿童时代美好的记忆．反对的人认为，其一，红包里钱的数额越来越大，成为了一个负担；其次，它成为了贿赂手握重权的官员的一个借口．作者认为，红包本身没有错，只有当我们明白了它的意义，我们才能送出我们诚挚的祝愿给年轻人．

解答 After the Spring Festival，there arises some hot topics，and lucky money is including as well．To collect opinions from the public，an online survey has∧made these days．
82% of the participants regard lucky money as one of the most important traditional custom，representing good wishes from the elderly to the new generation．Besides，lucky money is the more attractive part for children，it forms the good memory of our childhood．
The rest，however，think bad of it．For one thing，the amount is grown bigger and bigger，making it a heavy load．For another，it has been a good excuse to bribe （贿赂） people in the power，which is bad for building a healthy and harmonious society．
Personally speaking，lucky money is nothing wrong．Only when we know its meaning can you send our hearty wishes to the young．
详解：
1．arises改为arise 考查主谓一致．主语some hot topics是复数形式．谓语动词也应用复数形式．
2．including改为included 考查动词语态．lucky money与include之间是动宾关系，要用被动语态，且表示的是一般事实，要用一般现在时的被动语态．
3．加been 考查动词语态． survey与make之间是动宾关系，要用被动语态，根据句中时间状语these days，要用现在完成时的被动语态．
4．custom改为customs 考查名词复数．one of意为"…之一"，后接可数名词复数形式．
5．more改为most 考查形容词最高级．定冠词the后接形容词最高级，因attractive是多音节形容词，其前加most构成最高级．
6．it改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词是前面整个句子，在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．
7．bad改为badly 考查副词．think是动词，要用副词修饰．
8．grown改为growing 考查动词语态．此处grow是连系动词，没有被动语态，用现在进行时态．
9．the去掉考查固定搭配．in power意为"当权的，在朝的"，固定搭配．
10．you改为we 考查代词．主句中的we与从句中的we一致，表示泛指．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．