Question

17．假设你校英语社团举办以"讲求文明，从我做起"为主题的征文活动，请你以"On the Way to School"为题，写一篇英语短文．
内容主要包括：1）遵守交通法规；
2）注意举止文明．
注意：1）词数120左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4）短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数．These days，breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon，causing serious harm to life and the environment．Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone．As for me，it should start on the way to school．
I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way．If I ride a bicycle，I'll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green．If I walk，I'll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing． Meanwhile，I'll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy．Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere，I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible． I hope my behavior will make a difference．．

Answer 1

分析 本文为应用文，以"On the Way to School"为题，内容主要包括：1）遵守交通法规； 2）注意举止文明，属于提纲作文．在写作时应以第一人称为主，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．重要短语：cause harm to（对…造成伤害），as for （关于），keep sth in mind （把…记在心里），keep to（坚持，遵守），make a difference（有影响，起作用）．

解答 These days，breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon，causing serious harm to life and the environment．【高分句型】Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone．As for me，it should start on the way to school．
       I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way．If I ride a bicycle，I'll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green．If I walk，I'll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing．（遵守交通法规）Meanwhile，I'll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy．Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere，I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible．【高分句型】I hope my behavior will make a difference．（注意举止文明）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．