Question

【题目】一些父母经常翻看自己孩子的书包、日记甚至网上聊天记录(chat records)，请你就这一现象谈谈自己的看法。

注意：1,词数120左右；

2．可根据要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】Some parents tend to look into their child’s chat records, which is very common in our daily life.

As you know, some students are not getting along well with their parents, and it is their lack of communication that leads their parents to often look into their bags or diaries, even chat-on-line records. I fully understand what they are concerned about. They are actually afraid that we may get into some trouble. On the other hand, they have probably learned that some horrible stories about other teenagers.

However, I don’t think it is a proper way to do so because we not only need respect, but also expect to be trusted. A good relation is based on respecting and trusting each other.

【解析】 本文主要从父母翻看孩子的日记、书包、网上记录等，引出家长对孩子的不放心。第三段作者提出了自己的观点，孩子需要尊重和信任。

文中使用了be concerned about，on the other hand等高级短语；也使用了which和as引导的非限制性定语从句；还使用了that引导的定语从句；还四次使用宾语从句等等，充分说明该作者深厚的语言功底。