Question

18．In your English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．
提示词：放大镜：magnifier．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文，让我们就此图写一篇作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：描叙图片内容，图片揭示的道理．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为描叙图片内容．第二部分为图片揭示的道理．第三部分为最后的结论．
重点短语与句型：
stand for 代表
turn…into 把…变成
apply  to 运用；申请
高分句型一：I think what the picture shows us is that we need to magnify our weaknesses in our life此句用了what the picture shows us 引导主语从句，that引导表语从句
高分句型二：The reason why we use a magnifier is that we want to make sure how it looks like and how it is made此句the reason why…is that…中why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句

解答 In the picture，there is a guy using a magnifier to magnify a black dot on the desk．（描叙图片内容）
    I think what the picture shows us is that we need to magnify our weaknesses in our life．（高分句型一）Everyone has strengths and weaknesses．Overestimating the strengths make a person arrogant．What we should do is to identify our weaknesses which  the black dot stands for and to turn them into strengths．The reason why we use a magnifier is that we want to make sure how it looks like and how it is made．（高分句型二）By this way，we can use different techniques to erase the black dot and replace it by a colorful dot．（图片揭示的道理）
    We can apply this to our real life．We use different methods to erase our weaknesses and try to replace it by strength．This is the only way for us to develop more fully and it makes our life more valuable!（最后的结论）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．