Question

【题目】你的英国朋友Jim对你们学校的学生社会实践活动非常感兴趣。他来信希望你介绍这方面的有关情况。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1.学校有哪些社会实践活动；

2.你最喜欢哪一类活动；

3.喜欢的原因。

注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：社会实践活动 extracurricular activity

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m happy to hear that you’re interested in the extracurricular activities organized by our school. Now, I’d like to give you more details.

A variety of activities have been organized, such as visiting Capital Museum, taking a field trip to Qufu, Shandong, home of Confucius, planting trees in Mangshan Park and learning to bake a cake in a pastry shop, just to name a few.

The activities mentioned above are quite popular with students. My favorite kind of activity is field trips. I went to Qufu in Senior One and Hangzhou in Senior Two. Both trips deeply impressed me. The reasons why I like field trips are as follows. First, field trips offer me a good chance to broaden my horizons. As the Chinese saying goes: “It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.” Not only can I learn from locals and my own experiences, but also I can see with my own eyes our beautiful country and splendid culture. Second, field trips improve my research skills. Before we take field trips, we are always asked to prepare by searching online or in the library for useful information. Third, field trips help strengthen friendships. Since many of the field trips last several days, it is a good opportunity to bond with classmates better outside the classroom.

I really hope that you can go on a field trip with us in the future.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求用英语给英国朋友Jim写一封回信。

这是一篇书信类作文。你的英国朋友Jim对你们学校的学生社会实践活动非常感兴趣。他来信希望你介绍这方面的有关情况。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.学校有哪些社会实践活动；2.你最喜欢哪一类活动；3.喜欢的原因。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。