题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你所在的学校将于3月7日在学校报告厅举办关于垃圾分类的班会,希望外教Dr. Phillips参加班会并做一个演讲,请写一封邀请信,内容包括:
1. 班会的时间、地点;
2. 班会主题、意义。
注意:1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头结尾已经写好,不计收入总词数。
Dear Dr. Phillips,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Dr. Phillips,
On behalf of our class, I am honored to invite you to participate and give a speech in the forthcoming class meeting on Garbage classification to be held in our school hall On March 7.
As a citizen, learning how to classify different types of garbage as required is very important to help save resources and protect the environment. Thus, we decided to increase classmates’ garbage classification awareness through a class meeting. Since you have received two years’ environmental education, your participation and presentation will be the highlight of our meeting.
We sincerely hope that you could accept our invitation. If you can come, please let us know as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封书信:你的英国朋友Lucy在当地的一所孔子学院(Confucius Institute)学习,你刚获悉她在学院举办的中文诗词(poetry)比赛中荣获一等奖,用英语给她写一封电子邮件表示祝贺,并希望她有机会来中国深造,时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:Confucius Institute (孔子学院),the Chinese poetry competition(中文诗词比赛),my sincere congratulations(衷心的祝贺),further study(深造)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。