题目内容
16.假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每行中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符合(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Last weekend,I helped my grandparents their trip to Dalian.On Saturday morning,together with my grandparents,I search the Internet for the train schedule,the weather in Dalian,and some hotel informations.In the afternoon,we went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue.After the dinner,I packed into the suitcase the things what my grandparents would need,such as clothes,glasses,an umbrella,and a map.The next morning,I went to the station to show them off.Waved goodbye to them on the platform,I felt happily for them and wished them a safe journey.
分析 作者在短文中讲述了上周末帮爷爷奶奶安排了一次去大连的旅行.星期六的早晨,作者与爷爷奶奶一起上网查询了列车时刻表以及北戴河的天气情况,下文去给爷爷奶奶买了车票,晚饭后帮忙收拾了行李,第二天早晨到车站把爷爷奶奶送走.为爷爷奶奶做了这些事情,作者感到很高兴.
解答 Last weekend,I helped my grandparents∧their trip to Dalian.On Saturday morning,together with my
prepare
grandparents,I search the Internet for the train schedule,the weather in Dalian,and some hotel
searched
informations.In the afternoon,we went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my
information I
grandparents although there had a long queue.After the dinner,I packed into the suitcase the things
was 去掉the
what my grandparents would need,such as clothes,glasses,an umbrella,and a map.The next morning,
that
I went to the station to show them off.Waved goodbye to them on the platform,I felt happily for them
see Waving happy
and wished them a safe journey.
1.their前面加prepare;考查句意,help sb后面要跟动词原形,句中缺少动词,又根据下文中的意思可知作者为旅行做了很多准备,所以加上动词prepare.
2.search改为searched;考查动词的时态,时间状语为过去的时间On Saturday morning,所以用一般过去式.
3.informations 改为information;考查名词,information做为"信息,消息"讲是不可数名词,所以要用information.
4.we改为I;考查人称代词,结合上下文分析,句意应为"我去火车站帮爷爷奶奶买了车票",所以句子的主语应改为I.
5.had改为was;考查固定句型结构,这是固定句型there be 结构,又因为讲的是过去的事情,故用there was.
6.去掉the;考查冠词,一日三餐前面不加冠词,所以去掉the.
7.what改为that;考查定语从句,分析句子结构,这是一个定语从句,先行词为the things,故关系代词用that.
8.show改为see;考查固定短语,分析句意应为"我去车站为他们送行","为…送行"用固定短语"see sb off",所以show改为see.
9.Waving改为Waved;考查分词作状语,句子的主语 I 与动词wave是主动关系,所以用现在分词形式waving作状语.
10.happily改为happy;考查形容词,句子中的动词felt在这里用作系动词,所以应该用形容词作felt的表语.
点评 整体理解短文,充分运用所学的基础知识,包括一些实词和虚词的用法,固定短语搭配,习惯性用法,结合上下文整体关系,找出错误并加以修正.
At first I thought it had fallen,but at closer look I saw it had been very securely (牢牢地)(22)Awith several inches of sticking tape (胶条),I was (23)B who would attract people's attention in this way to sell a (24)A,and then I saw more such signs,a little girl and a lady.(25)B,I approached them and waited until the little girl (26)A another yard of tape around the last sign.
"Excuse me,but why are you placing the house for sale signs so close to the (27)C?"I asked.
"She is not selling the house.Look(28)B!"the lady said with a smile.I bent down adjusting (调整)my (29)D until I could finally read the small print.
"We miss you!Come home!"I read out loud."Then look at the (30)B!"the lady said.I was really (31)A my hands and knees and saw in the picture a child and a (32)C in front yard before standing up with a (33)Dlook.
"Her dog,Grace,is lost,"the lady explained.
'But most people would hang a lost (34)B where people could actually see it,"I said.
"Well,you saw it."the young girl responded.
The innocent (天真)answer made me hesitate (犹豫)to (35)Bfurther explanation.Thankfully,the lady continued to explain,"I have told her that it may be (36)C to find her dog because you can see the store has many signs posted.But she wanted her dog to find her.(37)Athe picture of the house,her and the dog…I didn't want to (38)B until she felt she did everything she could."she said.
I got(39)D.The signs were there for the dog to see.If you want to learn the meaning of(40)D,get down to a child's level.One week later Grace came home.Amazing!
21.A.chance | B.belief | C.mistake | D.cheat |
22.A.fastened | B.closed | C.locked | D.pressed |
23.A.shouting | B.wondering | C.seeking | D.testing |
24.A.house | B.picture | C.store | D.tape |
25.A.Continuously | B.Curiously | C.Carefully | D.Stupidly |
26.A.wound | B.placed | C.tore | D.spread |
27.A.store | B.pole | C.ground | D.car |
28.A.harder | B.closer | C.lower | D.further |
29.A.direction | B.sight | C.height | D.position |
30.A.design | B.picture | C.material | D.explanation |
31.A.on | B.with | C.off | D.by |
32.A.house | B.mother | C.dog | D.shop |
33.A.frightened | B.surprised | C.disappointed | D.puzzled |
34.A.poster | B.sign | C.mark | D.notice |
35.A.send for | B.ask for | C.call for | D.look for |
36.A.easy | B.pleasant | C.hard | D.hopeful |
37.A.Thus | B.However | C.Instead | D.Otherwise |
38.A.put up | B.give up | C.mix up | D.clear up |
39.A.this | B.those | C.these | D.it |
40.A.care | B.respect | C.life | D.faith |
A. | afraid | B. | fountain | C. | certain | D. | contain |
A. | careless | B. | period | C. | complete | D. | generation |
A. | has introduced | B. | was introduced | ||
C. | will introduce | D. | is being introduced |