Question

【题目】最近，某中学生英语报“Healthy Eating Advisor”专栏正在开展征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。

要点：

1. 健康饮食习惯的重要性；

2. 青少年怎样培养健康的饮食习惯。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Making healthy eating habits will help us have a healthy body and mind, and enjoy a happy life.

There are many ways to develop healthy eating habits. First, eat food from all the food groups to get the right balance between different foods. Second, a busy morning can never stop us eating breakfast, which will cause poor performance at school. Last but not the least, always keep a selection of healthy foods in the school bag, so that when we just have to eat something, we can make a healthy choice.

All in all, developing healthy eating habits is easier than we might think.

【解析】

试题分析：写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照方位顺序进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文用了较多的复合结构，All in all, developing healthy eating habits is easier than we might think.用了总结性的句型。开篇用了There are many ways to develop healthy eating habits句型引出了下文。