题目内容
20.目前,"中学生英语报"组织了一场讨论:城市内是否可以饲养宠物.请你根据下表所提供的信息,介绍讨论情况,并说明自己的观点和建议.1.支持饲养宠物:安慰孤寡老人人与动物和谐相处,增添生活情趣
2.反对饲养宠物:造成环境污染,吵闹声,甚至伤人
3.你的观点:…
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增减细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好.
Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.
分析 这篇议论文讨论城市内饲养宠物的利弊.也是半开放的作文,首先分析题目,观点分正反两方,要点基本上都已经给出,就是各自的观点,只需要翻译成英语即可.还要写出自己的观点,这就要求自己发挥,如果有不熟悉的词汇和句型要注意转化,使用自己熟悉的,有把握的词汇和句型.在写作的过程中要注意使用较好的句型:如定语从句,强调句型;状语从句等.同时也要使用合适的连词,让文章更连贯.
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语keep pets养宠物;Besides另外;get along well with相处的好;What is worse更糟的是;take some measures 采取措施
解答 Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.Some students think it's a good idea to keep pets because old people who live alone at home can get some comfort from pets.(高分句型)Besides,getting along well with animals will make our life interesting.
On the contrary,other students are against the idea.In their opinion,if too many people keep pets at home,it is bad for the environment.What is worse,pets may make too much noise and even attack people.(高分句型)
I like animals,so I don't think it is bad to keep pets at home.But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment.(高分句型)(102 words)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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