题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,去年暑假你在英国学习英语期间住在当地的一个寄宿家庭,并与该家庭的同龄人David结为好友。你想邀请他今年暑假来中国,请就此事给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.对David一家给你的照顾再次表示感谢;
2.你的邀请;
3.你为David安排的一些活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear David,
With the summer holidays approaching, I can't help thinking of the days when I was taken good care of in your family last summer. Let me express my thanks again to you and your family.
Now I'm writing to invite you to come to China this summer, if it is convenient for you. I plan to accompany you on trips to some places of interest, such as the Great Wall, where you will see why it is called one of the greatest wonders of the world. We can also spend some days staying in a village so that we can experience the real life of local people. What do you think of it?
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是一篇提纲类书面表达,要求考生写一篇邮件感谢对方,并向对方发出邀请。
第1步:审题。根据提示可知全文是一封电子邮件,假定你是李华,去年暑假你在英国学习英语期间住在当地的一个寄宿家庭,并与该家庭的同龄人David结为好友。你想邀请他今年暑假来中国,请就此事给他写封邮件。全文以一般现在时和将来时为主。
第2步:组织要点。1.对David一家给你的照顾再次表示感谢;2.你的邀请;3.你为David安排的一些活动。
第3步:根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句,关键词为 can't help thinking of, be taken good care of, express my thanks, accompany, places of interest, appreciate等。写作时注意电子邮件的格式和惯用语。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。