题目内容
5.上周你们班参加了学校的艺术活动,请根据以下提示,介绍从准备到参演的完整过程,给校刊英语园地写一篇以"Our Art Festival"为题的英文稿件.可增添细节,词数不少于60.稿件的开关已为你写好.提示词:戏剧drama
1、讨论后,决定表演戏剧;
2、认真排练;
3、在艺术节上展示;
4、获得一等奖.
Our Art Festival
Last week our class took part in the Art Festival of the school.We had a class meeting first,discussing what to perform in the festival.My classmates had several ideas such as putting on a drama,singing or dancing.As many of us were eager to participate,drama was our final choice.
Preparations started right after the discussion.Though most of us were new to drama,we all had the confidence to try.All our actors and actresses began to practice the play we chose.Meanwhile,other classmates were preparing the stage properties like costumes and other decorations.Our monitor even made some lovely hats for the drama.
The big day finally came.Every actor and actress performed at their best,impressing the audience greatly.Cheers and applause rose as they went up to receive the first prize.Our dream came true with the joint effort throughout the whole process..
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们校刊英语园地写一篇以"Our Art Festival"为题的英文稿件,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般过去时,内容要点包括:介绍从准备艺术节到参演的完整过程.我们此篇作文分为三部分,第一部分为讨论决定表演戏剧;第二部分为认真排练.第三部分为在艺术节上展示.
重点短语与句型:
take part in 参加
put on 上演
be eager to 渴望
have confidence to do sth有信心做某事
高分句型一:We had a class meeting first,discussing what to perform in the festival.此句用了现在分词短语作伴随状语
高分句型二:New though most of us were to drama,we all had the confidence to try此句用了adj+though+主谓,"尽管…"倒装结构
解答 Our Art Festival
Last week our class took part in the Art Festival of the school.We had a class meeting first,discussing what to perform in the festival.高分句型一 My classmates had several ideas such as putting on a drama,singing or dancing.As many of us were eager to participate,drama was our final choice.讨论决定表演戏剧
Preparations started right after the discussion.New though most of us were to drama,we all had the confidence to try.高分句型二All our actors and actresses began to practice the play we chose.Meanwhile,other classmates were preparing the stage properties like costumes and other decorations.Our monitor even made some lovely hats for the drama.认真排练
The big day finally came.Every actor and actress performed at their best,impressing the audience greatly.Cheers and applause rose as they went up to receive the first prize.Our dream came true with the joint effort throughout the whole process.在艺术节上展示
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
