Question

8．最近你校对学生的书写情况进行了调查，结果发现：随着电脑的普及，学生们越来越不重视书写（handwriting），其理由如图所示．请根据调查表提供的信息写一篇英语短文，介绍调查结果并发表自己的看法．
注意：词数120左右，文章的开头已给出（不计入总词数）．

Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，
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Answer 1

分析 1．分析题干可知，作文时态为一般现在时，围绕学生的书写情况进行描述．
2．短文第一段可引出话题：随着电脑的普及，学生们越来越不重视书写．
3．第二段描述一下调查结果即学生不重视书写的理由有：51.5%的学生认为可以用电脑写字，32.3%的学生认为没有时间练，10.9%的学生认为没有什么用，5.3%的学生有其他的理由．
4．第三段发表一下自己的看法，只要表述合理即可．
5．适当使用一些复合句和连接词，使上下文连贯．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：pay attention to注意；According to 根据；be busy with忙于；As the saying goes正如谚语所说；especially 尤其；Therefore因此；in my opinion以我的观点来看
 Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，more middle school students are paying less and less attention to handwriting．（高分句型一）
51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer，so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice．（高分句型二）
As the saying goes，writing style shows the man．Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial，especially for middle school students．（高分句型三）

解答 Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，more middle school students are paying less and less attention to handwriting．（高分句型一）（引出话题）
     According to a recent survey，many students don't want to improve their handwriting for various reasons.51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer，so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice．（高分句型二） 10.9 percent think that practising handwritng is useless．Yet the rest have other reasons．（学生不重视书写的理由）
     As the saying goes，writing style shows the man．Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial，especially for middle school students．（高分句型三） Therefore，in my opinion，more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future．（自己的看法）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．