Question

20．假如你是值日班长，你要在班会课上做个发言，主题是别害怕失败．
发言内容包括：
（1）对待失败不同的态度；
（2）自己的失败经历；
（3）你的建议．
注意：（1）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Hello，everyone．Today my speech is never to be afraid of failure in life． 
As we all know，failure is the mother of success．（高分句型一）Some successful people can constantly get precious lessons from failure．However，others lose confidence when they meet with any hardship，resulting in failure．（高分句型二）
Failure sometimes is more valuable than success．I still remember the experience of learning swimming last summer．I used to be terrified of water．With the encouragement of my coach，I made it at last，despite failing many times．The experience makes me learn something new about myself．
In a word，failure is not horrible．If you analyze carefully the reasons why you have failed，you will surely be a success one day．（高分句型三）
That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息在班会课上做个发言，主题是别害怕失败，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）对待失败不同的态度；（2）自己的失败经历；（3）你的建议．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：as we all know  众所周知；meet with  遇到；遭遇；be more than  大于，多于；be terrified of  害怕…
As we all know，failure is the mother of success．（高分句型一）
 However，others lose confidence when they meet with any hardship，resulting in failure．（高分句型二）
If you analyze carefully the reasons why you have failed，you will surely be a success one day．（高分句型三）

解答 Hello，everyone．Today my speech is never to be afraid in life．
     As we all know，failure is the mother of success．（高分句型一）Some successful people can constantly get precious lessons from failure．However，others lose confidence when they meet with any hardship，resulting in failure．（高分句型二）
     Failure sometimes is more valuable than success．I still remember the experience of learning swimming last summer．I used to be terrified of water．With the encouragement of my coach，I made it at last，despite failing many times．The experience makes me learn something new about myself．
     In a word，failure is not horrible．If you analyze carefully the reasons why you have failed，you will surely be a success one day．（高分句型三）
     That's all．Thank you．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．