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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

On a storm night, I was alone at home. After finishing my homework, I was about to go to bed. All of sudden, the light went out. Meanwhile, there was a flash of lightning following by thunderstorms. I was so scared that I ran to my bed but hid myself under the blanket. To make matters bad, my parents went to hospital to accompany with my sick grandfather. I felt too frightened because my mind was full of scary thought. After some time passed, I fall asleep at last. At breakfast I told my parents that I had seen last night. My parents were also frightened and they promised that they would ever leave me at home alone.

Answer 1

【答案】1.storm-stormy;

2.sudden 前加a;

3.following- followed;

4.but-and;

5.bad-worse;

6.with去掉;

7.thought-thoughts;

8.fall-fell;

9.that-what;

10.ever-never

【解析】考查形容词。修饰名词用形容词作定语，storm“暴风雨”是名词，其形容词形式是stormy表示“暴风雨的”。故将storm改为stomy。

考查冠词。all of a sudden“突然”是固定短语。故在sudden前加a。

考查非谓语动词。“followed by thunderstorms”作定语从句，修饰lightening，结合句意，follow与lightning是被动关系，用过去分词表示被动关系。故将following改为followed。

考查连词。句意：我如此害怕，跑到床上藏在毯子底下。结合句意，前后分句是顺承关系，不是转折关系。故将but改为and。

考查形容词。to make matters worse“更糟糕的是”是固定短语，故将bad改为worse。

考查介词。句意：更糟糕的是，我的父母去医院陪同我生病的祖父。accompany“陪伴；陪同”是及物动词，直接跟宾语。故去掉accompany后的with。

考查名词。句意：我觉得很害怕，因为我的心里充满了恐怖的想法。thought“想法”是可数名词，结合句意，故将thought改为thoughts。

考查动词。根据语境可知，文章讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时。故将fall改为fell。

考查连词。句意：早饭时，我告示父母我昨天晚上看到的。“what I had seen”是宾语从句，从句缺乏宾语，what引导宾语从句，从句中作主语、宾语或者表语，that引导宾语从句，无词义，不做成分，仅起引导作用。故将that改为what。

考查副词。句意：我的父母也害怕，许诺他们将再也不会独自留我在家。