Question

【题目】上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:

1. 农场情况；

2. 采摘过程；

3. 个人感受

注意:

1. 词数100左右；

2. 题目已为你写好。

题目:My Weekend

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Answer 1

【答案】My Weekend

Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.

On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders,We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft.I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.

I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!

【解析】

第一步：根据提示可知，上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括： 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety of animals, Using baskets and ladders,take a bite, be grateful for, get close to nature, feast on the sweetness.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。