题目内容
体育运动是中学生的共同爱好。请你根据下列提示写一篇题为 What We Get from Sports 的短文,短文应包含以下要点:
学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异。
多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己。
男孩们参加各项体育活动,希望运动能使自己更强壮。
女孩们也喜欢运动,希望运动能帮助自己减肥和保持苗条。
你对运动的观点。
注意:* 文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校名称。
* 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。字数:80词左右,不可逐字翻译。
* 参考词语:lose weight,keep slim (保持苗条)
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common --- an interest in sports.
One possible version:
Students in our school have one thing in common—an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. Girls also like sports. Some of them they want to lose weight, to be slim and pretty by doing sports.
In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲式的材料作文。题目为What We Get from Sports从运动中我们能得到什么,所写内容既要包含所有要点,也要表明自己的观点。大致内容给定,在写作时使用适当的连词,注意句式的变化。
【亮点说明】这篇短文能写出五个要点,行文连贯,句式丰富,能适当的运用连词。文章第二句开门见山点明学生参加体育运动的理由不一,引出下文。中间一段写出了主体部分,且言简意赅。熟练地运用了一些比较好的表达,They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger.,还有Some of them they want to lose weight, to be slim and pretty by doing sports. 动词、形容词和短语的使用也恰到好处,如relax themselves、take part in、in order to、pretty等等。最后一句In my opinion,no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports。巧妙地运用了no matter what 来引导让步状语从句。这使文章更有逻辑,更流畅。
总结:平时写作时多积累一些高级词汇,短语,以及好的固定搭配,连词,可以为作文增添不少色彩。
考点:考查提纲式作文的写作。