Question

【题目】你的家乡是一个依山傍水的小镇。过去，解放前，这里人们生活极其贫困。但现在人们生活的各个方面都发生了很大变化。

1. 请根据下面表格的提示，写一篇130词左右的短文，介绍该镇的变化情况。

2. 灵活运用连贯词；准确运用时态、语态。

3. 适当运用固定短语、搭配、经典句型。

人 口	约20万
面 积	约360平方公里
地理概况	坐落在大山脚下，面临一条大河，新建有许多工厂、商店、医院、学校
教育状况	解放(liberation)前只有一所学校，只有富家子弟可以上学，现在已建起了10所学校，每个孩子都有机会上学了。
生活状况	生活丰富多彩，人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等。都过上了幸福生活

Here, I’d like to introduce my hometown.

Answer 1

【答案】

Here I’d like to introduce my hometown.

My hometown is a small town surrounded with mountains and waters. It has a population of more than 200 thousand people and an area of 36 square kilometers. It lies at the foot of a mountain with a big river in front of it.

Before liberation, people lived a hard life. But now great changes have taken place here. As you can see, many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been built.

The school education has also improved. Before liberation there was only one school. Only the rich children could go to school. Now 10 schools have been set up. Every child has access to school education.

People's lives are colorful. After work they go shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports. Everyone in my hometown lives a happy life. Welcome to my hometown.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于描写类作文，根据提示信息来写一篇介绍一个小镇的作文。要注意一下几点：1、注意虽然题目说是你的家乡，但是加上要根据题目所给描述词，不能脱离题目条件；2、注意时态语态和词汇的用法；3、适当增加自己对这个小镇的描述，但不能遗漏题目的条件；4、适当使用高级句式，词汇要多变，给文章增色。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，描写细致到位，而且使用了多种句式和结构。有一些高级句式，如surrounded with mountains and waters是定语从句，with a big river in front of it是介词短语，lived a hard life、lives a happy life运用了同源宾语的手法。词汇短语丰富多变，如has a population of有多少人口，an area of占地多少，用于介绍家乡的地理位置很恰当，As you can see你能看到，has access to能够干某事，colorful丰富多彩的。结尾的Welcome to my hometown.表达了对文章读者的热情邀请，语气亲切，符合文章主旨。