Question

【题目】4月23日是“世界读书日”。在4月18日晚，伴随着人们的朗朗读书声，以“阅读点亮中国梦”为主题的2015书香中国阅读季正式启动。读书日虽只有一天，但我们应该天天读书。要让读书成为成长的翅膀、梦想的阶梯。在读书中追求人生价值，实现自我超越。请就此内容写一篇发言稿来号召人们读书，内容包括：

1. 阅读能开启人类智慧;

2. 阅读能帮助提升个人品位和魅力;

3. 阅读能培养技能，帮助获得更好的机会。

【写作要求】 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容

【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯

Answer 1

【答案】

"Books are the lamps lighting the road ahead. Books are the bridges connecting the lands apart." There are a great many such sentences about the benefits of reading and in deed, reading is really of great importance for us.

Just as an old saying goes, books are the ever-burning lamps of accumulated wisdom. Reading can not only broaden our vision, making us a full man and a wise man but also it can cultivate our taste and improve our personal charm. What’s more, through reading we can also learn some skills and help us get a good job.

【解析】本文是一篇提纲作文。成文时要注意：1. 要点要全面；2. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；3.介绍当前的社会现象使用一般现在时；4.注意使用恰当的连接词和过渡句，以使行文连贯，顺畅；5.尽量使用非谓语短语，介词短语以及定语从句，状语从句等包含信息量大的长句，以增加文章亮点。

【亮点说明】文章要点全面，语言通顺，很好地完成了写作任务。使用的句型有定语从句Just as an old saying goes,，和并列连词not only….but also, what’s more 等。俗语"Books are the lamps lighting the road ahead. Books are the bridges connecting the lands apart." 的使用也增加了文章的亮点。