题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,暑假期间, 你将参加学生代表团,回访去年来你校交流的瑞典(Sweden)某中学。 请你给去年来访时住在你家的Peter写信。
要点如下:
1. 时间: 8月20日至8月31日;
2. 参加人员:教师1人,学生30 人 ;
3. 希望Peter带你参观该市的足球俱乐部。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
How time flies! It’s almost a year since you returned to Sweden. I really treasure the good memories and the days when you stayed with us. Luckily, we’ll be meeting very soon.
As planned, a group of 30 students, accompanied by one teacher, will pay a return visit to your school this summer. Happily enough, I will be among them. We will start our journey in July. During our 12-day stay in your city, we will take part in some activities in your school and do some city tours.
By the way, as I was told that Sweden’s best football team is in your town, would you show me around the club if it’s convenient for you?
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文是一篇书信。暑假期间, 你将参加学生代表团,回访去年来你校交流的瑞典(Sweden)某中学。 请你给去年来访时住在你家的Peter写信。要点如下:1. 时间: 8月20日至8月31日;2. 参加人员:教师1人,学生30 人 ;3. 希望Peter带你参观该市的足球俱乐部。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇书信,格式正确,采用三段式,内容齐全,结构布局合理,文章使用高级句子。How time flies使用感叹句;It’s almost a year since you returned to Sweden.since固定句式;I really treasure the good memories and the days when you stayed with us.when引导时间状语从句;As planned, a group of 30 students, accompanied by one teacher, will pay a return visit to your school this summer.as引导非限制性定语从句;as I was told that Sweden’s best football team is in your town, would you show me around the club if it’s convenient for you?
As引导原因状语从句,if引导条件状语从句。