题目内容
14.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Chinese athletes have also made important contributions for the Olympic Games.At the 1984Los Angels Olympics,the People's Republic of China returned to the Olympics after 32years'absent.I'm confident that the whole of China must have been felt rather proudly when Xu Haifeng won the first gold medal for his country.Deng Yaping,that won 4gold medals in 1992and 1996.is perhaps the greatest female table tennis player the world had ever seen.At a 2004Athens Olympic Games,Liu Xiang excited people all over Asia while he became the first Asian to win the gold medal in the men's 110-meter hurdles.
We looking forward to seeing more of them in future Olympic Games.Join 1in wishing the Olympic Movement a successful future to match its past glory.
分析 本文主要讲述中国运动员对奥林匹克运动会的贡献.1984年中国回归奥林匹克运动会后,徐海峰为中国获得首金;邓亚萍可能是最伟大的乒乓球运动员;刘翔是第一个亚洲男子110栏金牌得主.
解答 Chinese athletes have also made important contributions for the Olympic Games.At the 1984Los Angels Olympics,the People's Republic of China returned to the Olympics after 32 years'absent.I'm confident that the whole of China must have been felt rather proudly when Xu Haifeng won the first gold medal for his country.Deng Yaping,that won 4 gold medals in 1992 and 1996.is perhaps the greatest female table tennis player the world had ever seen.At a 2004 Athens Olympic Games,Liu Xiang excited people all over Asia while he became the first Asian to win the gold medal in the men's 110-meter hurdles.
We∧looking forward to seeing more of them in future Olympic Games.Join I in wishing the Olympic Movement a successful future to match its past glory.
详解:
1.for改为to 考查介词.make contribution to意为"为…做出贡献",是固定搭配
2.absent改为absence 考查名词.名词所有格years'后用名词形式.
3.去掉been 考查动词语态.feel是连系动词,没有被动语态,been是多余的,要去掉.
4.proudly改为proud 考查形容词.feel是连系动词,后接形容词作表语.
5.that改为who 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词Deng Yaping在从句中作主语,用关系代词who.
6.had改为has 考查动词时态.根据句中ever,要用现在完成时态,且the world是单数形式,助动词用has.
7.a改为the 考查冠词.2004 Athens Olympic Games表示特指,用定冠词the.
8.while改为when 考查连词.while表示"段"时间,when表示"点"时间,此处应是后者之意.
9.加上are或者将looking改为look 考查句子结构.分析句子结构,句中缺少谓语,加are构成现在进行时态,或将looking改为look构成一般现在时态.
10.I改为me 考查代词.join是动词,后接宾格代词.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
A. | There | B. | It | C. | They | D. | That |
A. | in other words | B. | on the other hand | ||
C. | for one thing | D. | above all |
A. | that | B. | when | C. | which | D. | where |