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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Tom,

I am delighted that you have passed the exam successful. What you have gained are the result of your hard work. How time flies! It’s two years before you came to study Chinese in Beijing. In the passed two years, you have helped us a lot, without that we couldn’t have made great progress in English.

Before you leave, many classmate and I intend to hold a farewell party for you, hope that you can remember the wonderful time we spent together. By the way, the party will be held on this Saturday evening in my house. We can take the No.1 bus at the hotel gate and get off bus at the Booking Building. I will be there meeting you.

We’re looking forward to your coming.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

1.successful ---- successfully

2.are ---- is

3.before---- since

4.passed --- past

5.that --- which

6.classmate --- classmates

7.hope --- hoping

8.去掉on

9.we----you

10.bus前面加the

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试题分析:

1.用副词修饰动词。

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5.这里含有一个介词+关系代词引导的定语从句,指物,只能用which。

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Homesickness manifests itself in many ways. You may miss mum’s cooking, your pets, or even your old bed. All this becomes a fond memory of the past. Homesickness can be a bitter feeling for many students, especially when faced with the challenges of settling into an unfamiliar environment.

But remember, you’re not alone. According to a recent BBC article, 70 percent of British college students experience homesickness. In this increasingly globalized world in which people migrate to faraway places for a relationship, education or work, homesickness is a feeling shared by many adults.

Homesickness can have similar symptoms to depression and in extreme cases it can develop into a panic attack. As for the term, homesickness or nostalgia wasn’t invented until the 17th century. It was considered a disorder by a Swiss physician, who attributed soldiers’ mental and physical discomfort to their longing to return home, “nostos” from Greek, and the accompanying pain, “algos”.

Studies in recent years, however, have shown that nostalgia may have some benefits to our mental health. After a decade of surveys and researches, Constantine Sedikides, a US social psychologist, found that nostalgia is what makes us human. He explains that nostalgia can resist loneliness, boredom and anxiety. Therefore, it’s necessary for college students to learn some ways to overcome the uncomfortable feeling.

1. From the first two paragraphs, we can infer that __________.

A. homesickness means a fond memory of the past

B. only a few students will experience homesickness

C. homesickness is an enjoyable emotion among freshmen

D. college freshmen usually suffer from homesickness after weeks

2.According to the passage, we can know that _________.

A. homesickness may cause mental diseases

B. homesickness is a feeling only shared by adults

C. homesickness won’t do any good to our health

D. homesickness is also called nostalgia in Switzerland

3.What is most likely to be discussed in the paragraph that follows?

A. some benefits about homesickness

B. other problems in college freshmen’s life

C. how to make campus life more meaningful

D. some tips on how to cope with homesickness

4.The attitude of Sedikides towards homesickness is _________.

A. negative B. supportive C. skeptical D. critical

5.What is the best title for the passage?

A. Let’s embrace homesickness

B. How to fit into the college life

C. A harmful emotion—homesickness

D. The disadvantages of homesickness

 

In our world today, the media and entertainment industries are constantly focusing on beauty over brains. Movies, television shows, commercials, and magazines all make use of models and actors whose physical attributes(特性) will sell their product.

As our country is trying to reduce the obesity numbers, eating disorder statistics continue to increase due to the push for thinner people. While obesity is a serious medical condition that can lead to many health problems, many of us try to lose weight for appearance purposes. Children as young as elementary school age have begun to worry about the numbers that appear on the scale. In my opinion, it seems that “fat” has become the new“ugly”.

Two weeks ago, 37-year-old Wisconsin television reporter Livingston, who is 235 pounds, received an email from a man named Krause. In the email Krause attacked her, writing,“Your physical condition hasn’t improved for many years. Surely you don’t consider yourself a suitable example for this community’s young people, girls in particular.”

Today, it seems that a vast majority of people care more about how they look and appear to their peers rather than what is inside. The truth is that every person is built differently; we all come in different shapes and sizes. Just because someone is heavier, that doesn’t mean they eat large amounts of junk food around the day. Likewise, even though a person is thin, that doesn’t mean they are necessarily healthy and fit.

If you are reading this and you struggle with your weight or your appearance, please recognize that you are beautiful and special in your own way. You are worth so much more than you realize, and even if I don’t know you, understand that I respect and support you. Beauty is not defined by size; it is defined by how we treat others and respect ourselves. In the words of the talented film actress Kirstie Alley, “There’s a lot more to life than how fat or thin you are.”

1.With so many people losing weight, it will end in .

A. models’ and actors’ appearance in ads

B. the fall of media and entertainment industries

C. more and more people becoming obesity

D. more people’s suffering from eating disorder

2.The underlined phrase “the numbers that appear on the scale” in the second paragraph may mean .

A. intelligenceB. weightC. patienceD. strength

3.The writer used the example of Jennifer Livingston to show .

A. people think “fat” looks ugly

B. fat people are becoming cleverer

C. physical condition is good

D. young people never follow example

4.What Kirstie Alley said means .

A. people should pay attention to the appearance

B. there is no need for any people to go on diet

C. people are beautiful when they concern others

D. there’s always someone who understands and supports you

 

A cancer-stricken British teenage girl said Thursday she had been moved by messages of support from around the world after writing an online “Bucket List” of things she wanted to do before dying.

Alice Pyne,l5,created an Internet blog in which she described her fight against a cancer of the white blood cells.“I’ve been fighting cancer for almost four years and now I know that the cancer is gaining on me and it doesn’t look like I’m going to win this one,” she wrote .

For her list,the teenager took inspiration from the 2007 film “The Bucket List” in which two men who were badly ill,draw up a list of things they wish to do before they die.

On her list,at the site www.alicepyne.blogspot.com,she has included making everyone sign up to be a bone marrow donor(骨髓捐赠者),swimming with sharks ,meeting boy band Take That and getting a purple iPad computer.

Messages of support and offers of help quickly flooded her webpage and it became one of the most talked about subjects on Twitter.

“Oh, dear and I thought that I was just doing a little blog for a few friends!” she wrote after her site attracted huge attention.“Thank you so much for all your lovely messages to me.”

Pyne,who lives with her family in the northwest English town of Ulverston,revealed(透露)the management of Take That had arranged for her to see the band after reading her blog.A group of local lawmakers have also joined forces with the Anthony blood cancer charity to encourage people to join its stem cell register.

1.What happened after Alice Pyne wrote her “Bucket List”?

A.People around the world sent messages to support her.

B.People sent gifts to her from all over the world.

C.A lot of people offered to donate bone marrow to her.

D.The media called on people to help her.

2.Alice Pyne wrote her “Bucket List” to .

A.catch people’s attention

B.say goodbye to a few friends

C.give comfort to two terminally ill men

D.express her last few wishes

3.It can be inferred from the second paragraph that Alice Pyne .

A.is unaware of her own conditions

B.is very sad to know that she will die

C.is calm to know that death is approaching

D.is still quite confident in fighting against cancer

4.Which of the following is NOT on Alice Pyne’s “Bucket List”?

A.To ask people to donate bone marrow.B.To get a cool computer.

C.To swim with shark.D.To meet a boy.

5.Take That will arrange to .

A.meet Pyne in person

B.help Pyne in any possible way

C.donate money to Pyne

D.invite Pyne to join the band

 

However urban life strikes you,cities worldwide have been growing even more rapidly.Some of this growth has occurred in the developed world,but the most dramatic increase has been in the Third World.Almost all the world’s population growth over the next 30 years will take place in the cities of developing countries

By the year 2030,for the first time in history,60 percent of the world’s people will be living in cities.

This is actually good news in some ways.“Cities are the fundamental building blocks of prosperity,” says Marc Weiss,chairman of the Prague Institute for Global Urban Development,“ both for the nation and for families.” Industrial and commercial activities in urban areas account for between 50 and 80 percent of the gross domestic product (GDP) in most countries of the world“ there’s the crazy notion that the way to deal with a city’s problems is to keep people out of them,” Weiss continued.“But the problems of the rural life are even more serious than those of the city.” For better or worse,urban-watchers are clear on one point: The quality of life for most people in the future will be determined by the quality of cities.Those cities will be bigger than ever.And yet,population numbers by themselves don’t determine a city’s prospects; after all,Addis Ababa,Ethiopia,and Hamburg,Germany,have the same population.Nor is explosive growth necessarily the determining factor.“City problems,” one authority points out,“mostly have to do with weak,ineffective,and usually unrepresentative city governments.”

1.The passage mainly discusses ______________.

A.Big cities.B.City life.

C.Population.D.Gross Domestic Product.

2.According to the passage,in the year of 2030 _______.

A.there will be 21 cities having a population of more than 10 million.

B.rural area will be extinct.

C.most people will live in cities.

D.the third world will keep abreast with the developed world.

3.In the author’s opinion,_________.

A.better city,better life

B.both urban and rural areas have a larger population

C.the larger population,the faster a city develops

D.both urban and rural areas have larger gross domestic products

4.Which statement is NOT true according to the passage?

A.The developing countries develop faster than the developed countries.

B.Cities contribute more to the GDP than the villagers.

C.Some problems are more easily solved in cities than in country.

D.It’s impossible to solve urban problems by getting people out of cities.

5.The last paragraph implies that ____________.

A.public services are ineffective.

B.cities are increasing too fast.

C.population is not linked with development.

D.government should be responsible for the problems in the cities.

 

Coming home after working out for a whole day I had my purse lost.I it had slipped out my backpack as I was being .While it was probably very close to my apartment it still failed to come into and I had no but to cancel my debit cards.

I’d had the purse for more than a decade as it was a Christmas present ,which was a bright, red leather, Cheeky Monkey purse ,so probably not entirely for a 36-year-old but I was very upset to have lost it!

Everyone I spoke to I might get the purse back but the money and vouchers in it would very likely disappear.I had written off the of the purse and was even considering whether to move on and go “grown-up” when I was seeking a .

I came home late the following night and my monkey purse was on my mat! I checked the contents and everything was including anything of cash value.I was astounded when I read the note which read, “I came across this last night.It was too dark to it then ,so I came back tonight.I got your from your license.Sorry.Iain.”

Not only had this man returned my purse but he thought he me an apology for not bringing it back sooner!

I have told almost all my acquaintances, who almost responded with a similar standard answer, “It restores your in human nature” and it lots of stories about similar experiences.

There were no contact so I am unable to get in touch to say thank you to Iain, but I hope he will be of how grateful I am!

1.A.doubted B.suspected C.proved D.recognized

2.A.put off B.set off C.dropped off D.left off

3.A.effect B.appearance C.view D.attention

4.A.ability B.thought C.alternative D.decision

5.A.grown up B.brought up C.taken on D.applied to

6.A.decided B.doubted C.prayed D.exposed

7.A.previously B.approximately C.regularly D.eventually

8.A.however B.therefore C.otherwise D.though

9.A.value B.contents C.name D.lists

10.A.process B.comfort C.judgment D.replacement

11.A.undamaged B.lost C.checked D.reserved

12.A.appealing B.thrilling C.accompanying D.entertaining

13.A.look over B.go over C.get through D.see through

14.A.name B.phone number C.address D.card

15.A.forgot B.made C.paid D.owed

16.A.faith B.reputation C.quality D.justice

17.A.adapted B.inspired C.described D.expanded

18.A.fantastic B.worthy C.priceless D.positive

19.A.tracks B.outlines C.details D.accounts

20.A.proud B.sensitive C.aware D.certain

 

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