题目内容
【题目】假设你是李津,从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教 (tutor) 的广告,欢迎中国学生参加。请你写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:
1.自我介绍;
2.参加意图;
3.希望获准。
注意:
1.词数不少于100字;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear sir or Madam,
I’m Li Jin, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language.
I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from China and I'd like to get this job. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and I’m excellent at it. Besides, I've been learning English for 12 years with a good command of spoken and written English.
I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生就国际中学生家教组织招聘兼职中文家教的广告写一封申请信。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文。
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法。
要求:
1.自我介绍;
2.参加意图;
3.希望获准。
第二步:列提纲(重点短语)
happened to read;native tongue;a good command of spoken and written English;introduce Chinese culture.
第三步:连词成句
1.I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet
2. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and I’m excellent at it.
3. Besides, I've been learning English for 12 years with a good command of spoken and written English.
4. I’m willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序:自我介绍;参加目的;希望获准
2.表示并列补充关系:For me;Besides,;and
第五步:润色修改