题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,得知某英文报社要评选“The Most Qualified Student”(最美中学生),请你用英语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下:
1.介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息;
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high school student and I happened to have heard that you are hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student. It is a great honor for me to introduce one of my very best friends, Lin Yang.
First of all, Lin Yang, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard, but also behaves well. Secondly, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin. Last but not least, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need. Therefore, I here highly recommend him to you with all my heart.
Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本篇书面表达属于书信类作文,根据提示信息完成写作。写作时注意以下几点:1.仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2.要依据题时情景或词语,按着一定逻辑关系来写。且要注意人称和礼貌用语。3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种结构和句式。I happened to have heard that you are hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student.运用动词不定式的完成式;It is a great honor for me to introduce one of my very best friends, Lin Yang.it做形式主语,动词不定式的复合结构做真正的宾语,a great honour是抽象名词的具体化;First of all, Lin Yang, who is among the most diligent students in our school,who引导非限制性定语从句;另外,First of all, econdly, Last but not least, Therefore,等的运用为文章增色添彩。