Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是中学生李华，你收到正在学习汉语的美国笔友Peter的电子邮件，说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难，感到非常着急。请根据以下要点给他回信并提出建议，帮他来解决这方面的困难。

1.不要担忧，要有信心。

2.给自己更多练习汉语的机会。

3.让自己浸泡在汉语的环境当中。

要求：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2.词数：100词左右。

3.邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

I have received your letter.

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

I’m sorry to hear that you are going through a hard time learning Chinese. Now I’m writing to give you some suggestions.

To begin with, don’t be anxious and trust yourself. Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world, so it’s normal for a beginner to have some trouble. Besides, grab every opportunity to practice using the language. The more you practice, the more fluent you will be in it. Above all, involve yourself in a Chinese environment. Make sure that you are surrounded by books and TV programs in Chinese, and by friends speaking Chinese, which is essential to the learning of any language.

Looking forward to your improvement soon.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文为一封建议信。收到正在学习汉语的美国笔友Peter的电子邮件，说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难，感到非常着急。要求根据要点给他回信并提出建议，帮他来解决这方面的困难。写作要点要求：1.不要担忧，要有信心。2.给自己更多练习汉语的机会。3.让自己浸泡在汉语的环境当中。

写作亮点：本篇要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，句子简洁明了，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：宾语从句that you are going through a hard time learning Chinese和that you are surrounded by books and TV programs in Chinese，不定式to give表目的，定语从句which is essential to the learning of any language. one of句型，The more，The more句型，Looking forward to等词汇。