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音乐被公认为全人类共同的语言,是我们生活中必不可少的一部分。请你根据以下提示信息,写一篇关于音乐的英语短文。

●音乐的重要性;

●你所知道的音乐类型;

●你最喜欢哪一类音乐?说明你喜欢的理由。

注意:1. 词数120左右 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Music

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答案

Music

Music is a universal language to all human beings, which has the most powerful magic in the world. First, it can make us feel relaxed both mentally and physically, thus helping reduce our pressure at work and life. Second, music can cheer us up whenever we meet difficulties and feel sad. In addition, music can be of great help to learn another culture.

There are different varieties of music, such as popular music, classical music, co untry music, jazz music, rap music, rock music and so on.

Of all the music, I like popular music best. For one thing, with beautiful melody, it is pleasant to hear; for another, most popular music deals with the topics of love and friendship, which appeal to us young people.

【解析】

本文是一篇议论文以音乐为话题展开这篇文章具有较高的逻辑层次性首先第一段介绍了音乐给人带来的好处;第二段列举了作者所知道的几种音乐类型;第三段讲述了作者最喜欢的音乐以及原因。文章结构明显,条理清晰,抓住题干中所给的主要信息进行叙述,避免了偏题的可能性。值得我们模仿与学习。

【亮点点拨】

本文围绕题干所给的信息逐一展开,运用了较多的连接词将全文进行串联。如:In additionOf all the music等等词来将全文进行串接,使得整篇文章不显得松散。这里值得我们加以关注的一点是文章首段在讲述音乐对人的影响中,不仅运用到了美句Music is a universal language to all human beings, which has the most powerful magic in the world非限制性定语从句作为总起句同时也运用了多个逻辑顺序词语FirstSecond等。文中还运用了多个值得积累的短语词组:For one thingfor anotherThere are different varieties of等等

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