题目内容
【题目】假设你是李津,你的英国朋友Jenny生日将至,你画了一幅中国画《竹》作为生日礼物寄送给她。请你给她写一封信,说明其寓意并表示祝福。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Jenny,
As your birthday is drawing near, I've prepared a Chinese painting bamboo, which is specially drew for you.
In Chinese culture, bamboo carries many best wishes and excellent qualities. On one hand, it stands straight and stays green all year round, so it's always full of life. I wish you as strong and energetic as a bamboo. On the other hand, it's tough outside but hollow inside. If compared to a bamboo, one is usually considered to be strong-willed and modest. All in all, we use bamboo to represent a noble and gentle person.
I hope you like the gift and wish you a happy birthday.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是李津,你的英国朋友Jenny生日将至,你画了一幅中国画《竹》作为生日礼物寄送给她。请你给她写一封信,说明其寓意并表示祝福。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):Chinese painting bamboo (中国画《竹》);on one hand (一方面);energetic (有活力的);strong-willed (意志坚强的);all in all (总之)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。