题目内容
【题目】请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation), 按要求写一篇短文。
Imagination is more important than knowledge. ——Albert Einstein
内容要求:
1. 你对该引语的理解;
2. 相关的例子;
3. 恰当的结尾。
注意:
1. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息;
3. 词数120左右。
【答案】
This quotation stresses the importance of imagination over knowledge. Imagination alows us to free ourselves from the limits of our body and it can take us where our feet won’t. Imagination is to man what fuel is to cars. Without imagination, we won’t be able to explore the unknown and the world will be colorless.
Great inventions that change the course of human history often begin with imagination, for example, planes. The Wright brothers had imagined flying like birds ever since they were young. Never losing sight of their dream, they finally succeeded. Admittedly, other qualities also play an important role. It is imagination that starts all this.
Sadly, our imagination doesn’t necessarily keep pace with our knowledge. Some students gradually lose the ability to imagine in the endless homework and exams. However, I firmly hold the belief that imagination is a pair of wings that God lend us and should be cherished.
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于开放性作文,要求我们就:想象力比知识更重要来写一篇作文。仍然属于议论文,可以使用一般现在时和第三人称。议论文的写作是比较容易的文体,提出一个主题,对这个主题展开讨论。对于这类文体宜采用三段式文章,第一段首先对从对待集体方面的态度和做法进行说明;第二段从对待他人的态度方面着手,结合文章的提示,进行说明;第三段通过对待自己的态度来对如何受欢迎陈述自己是如何做的,中间需要运用上表起承转合的连词、定语从句、倒装等语法现象使文章富有深度、句式多变。此题目中要点给出来的并不多,需要考生自行组织,自由发挥,需要写的内容已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。同时在写作时要注意使用高级的词汇与高级的句型,不要遗漏任何的要点,同时要使用合适的连接词来连接整个文章,使文章更有条理性。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,文中第一句his quotation stresses the importance of imagination over knowledge. 开门见山,精简的句式,让读者眼前一亮。而文中也也使用了大量的类似However, I firmly hold the belief that imagination is a pair of wings that God lend us and should be cherished的从句,也为文章增色不少。