Question

【题目】When it comes to success, much will be given to those who are hard working; little to those who are lazy.

注意：①无须写标题；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；

④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

Answer 1

【答案】

One important lesson I’ve learnt from school life is that success comes from hard work.

When I entered the high school a year ago, I was ashamed of my English. Since my English teacher encouraged me to work harder. I’ve made rapid progress and gained great confidence. Honestly speaking, I made it a rule to read aloud English for half an hour every morning. And on my way to school or home I kept listening to English downloaded. Also I learnt every text by heart until I could recite it. Meanwhile, I tried to grasp what my teacher taught in class. To my delight, my efforts paid off and I often got a high score in English. Now I’ve become one of the top students in my school.

So I believe that success belongs to those who are hard working. In fact, learning English isn’t only learning a subject but also having a wonderful journey of discovery (with great efforts).

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意的有：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

亮点说明：本文用了三段式的结构，有条理的写出了要点。写出了自己的事例，运用了第一人称为主的写作方法，过去式为主。文章不华丽，但是却很值得读。亮点较多，不一一列出。