题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你向美国笔友Jack介绍你校开设的学生社团活动的情况,大致内容介绍:
1、活动对象:高一和高二学生;活动时间:每周二 的三点钟以后。
2、 通过参加活动,你们的收获。3、 你的感受。
注意:1、词数不少于100;2、开头和结尾已经给出3、 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Mike,
Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school.
Yours
LiHua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school .These clubs are set up by the Students’ Union and they are intended for students from Grade Two and Grade Three, open after 3 o’clock on Tuesday afternoon.
The club activities, aiming to offer students more opportunities to show their different talents, benefit us a lot. Taking part in club activities can help us to make new friends, expand our circle, and develop interpersonal skills. At the same time, these activities can help us to develop self-confidence, communicating with each other more easily. Besides, we have developed different skills and many interests, which enrich our lives.
In my opinion, I acquire more knowledge in an interesting way. Meanwhile, I bring myself more relaxation after hard study, which reduces my tiredness.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇文章是一个提纲式作文,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、确定文章的总体框架,要在试题给出的立场的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。1.本文文法简单流畅,不拖泥带说,句式多样。 2.使用了多样词组 3.文章行文结构严密,能够结合自己的看法,具有现实意义 4.逻辑鲜明,思路清晰。在考场上可谓一篇高分佳作。